likhan valeyaa ....

hey ppl , i juss wrote dese lines :) but d matter is i wrte dem in punjabi and i tried trsnlating it in hindi but it doesnt rhyms n dnt get dat poetic effect yea so plz .... nways here it goesz hope so its appreciated:)

likhan valeyaa ho ek dyaa likh de,
mera kamra ch mere yaar da pyaar likh de,
ik na likhi mere yaar da vichora,
hor bhaven dukh hazaar likh de ..............